Long SentencesMost of us can write a competent sentence of 10 to 20 words. Writing a good sentence much longer than that requires extraordinary talent that almost all of us lack. Consider the following passage from A. A. Milne's 1926 story "In Which Piglet is Entirely Surrounded by Water" which contains a sentence of 193 words. "I shall call this boat The Brain of Pooh," said Christopher Robin, and The Brain of Pooh set sail forthwith in a south-westerly direction, revolving gracefully. You can imagine Piglet's joy when at last the ship came in sight of him. In after-years he liked to think that he had been in
Very Great Danger during the Terrible Flood, but the only danger he
had really been in was the last half-hour of his imprisonment, when
Owl, who had just flown up, sat on a branch of his tree to comfort
him, and told him a very long story about an aunt who had once laid
a seagull's egg by mistake, and the story went on and on, rather
like this sentence, until Piglet who was listening out of his window
without much hope, went to sleep quietly and naturally, slipping
slowly out of the window towards the water until he was only hanging
on by his toes, at which moment, luckily, a sudden loud squawk from
Owl, which was really part of the story, being what his aunt said,
woke the Piglet up and just gave him time to jerk himself back into
safety and say, "How Keep 'em short folks! |